Can you read and critique? Plz?

Overall, a good lead in for your story. Two things: hay is not 'disheveled', change that word to something else or omit it completely. And, hair is not 'sporadic'.....change that to something else. Maybe 'tufts' of hair. Your thoughts are in the right direction but the words don't fit the object. Be careful that you don't end up with the same story plot of those sweet little big-eared creatures that turned mean when they got wet....what was the name of that movie? Plagarism is an automatic fail.